Poetry, for me, is about using words rhythmic nature to create a mind set. It is about playing with structure to breakthrough language's limits. Like life, you got to use reality's tools to imagine anything beyond it.
Here are some of my poems.
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This poem inspired me, and I scribbled down some metaphors that jived for me:ThoughtsThoughts can be like cloudsAmorphous shades of blueOn a lazy summer's day.Thoughts can be like whispersAlmost catch their meaningBefore they've moved away.... Nice work overall, I enjoyed the poems I've read
Hey, Danielle,Thanks for sharing. I think metaphors are fun and thought provoking, and I especially liked the imagery provoked in your lines "Amorphous shades of blue On a lazy summer's day" The sense of free flying thoughts almost brushing past someone.I'm glad you liked my work, and thanks again for sharing.