Poetry, for me, is about using words rhythmic nature to create a mind set. It is about playing with structure to breakthrough language's limits. Like life, you got to use reality's tools to imagine anything beyond it.
Here are some of my poems.
Thanks for sharing. I think metaphors are fun and thought provoking, and I especially liked the imagery provoked in your lines "Amorphous shades of blue On a lazy summer's day" The sense of free flying thoughts almost brushing past someone.
I'm glad you liked my work, and thanks again for sharing.
thought provoking...
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ReplyDeleteThis poem inspired me, and I scribbled down some metaphors that jived for me:
ReplyDeleteThoughtsThoughts can be like clouds
Amorphous shades of blue
On a lazy summer's day.
Thoughts can be like whispers
Almost catch their meaning
Before they've moved away.
... Nice work overall, I enjoyed the poems I've read
Hey, Danielle,
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing. I think metaphors are fun and thought provoking, and I especially liked the imagery provoked in your lines "Amorphous shades of blue On a lazy summer's day" The sense of free flying thoughts almost brushing past someone.
I'm glad you liked my work, and thanks again for sharing.